by jesstoyou
MORE PLEASE!!! I was so excited when I saw you posted another chapter!!
I can't wait for me lol I can't wait for her to get into trouble again,,,,its funny watching them fight and her being all stubborn lol
Great chapter!!!
i need more....:)
pls continue your story...i love it very much....
It's intriguing story - but I can't help hating him and hoping she fights and makes his life miserable because until she has the choice to leave its just rape.
I love this story. He is so very naughty and I do so hope that she gives him a very hard time. Please give us more soon.
OMG, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep writting, cant wait for the next installment! I'm addicted!!
please update soon i wanna know what would happen next
it has been over a month since the last chapter :S :S
I honestly think this story is the best one on literotica ! I keep wishing that she'll finally realize she's in love with him. But at the same time I don't think he deserves her love quite yet. I LOVE this story and would change nothing about it. I love what you've done with this story and I can't wait to see where you are going with this ammmazing story. I only wish the updates were sooner. But oh well. The longer wait does not matter anymore once i've read what has been posted. :)
this story is amazing I keep reading it over and over please post again soon.
please keep writing and post the next chapter soon! i've been waiting for forever for it! ):
This story is amazing. Once I started reading it, I had to read it all the way through at one setting. Is it completed or will you be adding more chapters? At the last chapter, it sounds like she has finally made peace with her life/husband. He does sound like a hunk!!!!
please continue writing this story......its very addicting. i do hope you continue posting more chapters... its another cliffhanger I want to know what will happen
Your story is amazing!!!!
Please continue your story.
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Dont make it be too long!
Please add the next chapter. I'd love to see what happens next!
This is by far one of the best pieces I've read on here! Oh please write more, I have to know what happens next!
Is this the end of the story? I hope not because I love it, it is my favorite on literotica.
This is turining into a very good story so please dont stop. Sometimes I'm honestly rather worried, Alisando seems to go past the dominant figure to a rapist and attacker. It seems that if he wanted to teach her and show her he loved her then he would do so, instead he tells her she is his and demands she give up her life and everyhting she is, and belong 110% to him. My other thing is the positives of their relationship still seem fuzzy to me, i get the what she is not supposed to do but i think he has a lot more exsplaining ot do and Im glad she doesnt have stokhoms syndrom.
NEXT CHAPTER! NEXT CHAPTER! Please stop torturing us with anticipation.
The correct phrase is 'for all intents and purposes.'
hey lisaislefty, so what?!
i love where this is heading!!!
Hi there. I'm enjoying your story and you're a great writer, but I'd be careful with the Italian. You make a lot of errors and its odd that Nicolette speaks more of it than Alessandro. Just a tip to help you keep it believable. I look forward to reading the rest.