by Bowoodstock
your story has me waiting on pins and needles. I like how you build up the tension then slowly let it relax, then boom back to tension. plus the way your charaters interact, makes them more real to me ( I hate the fluff and buff stories). Add to the fact that which each chapter I begin to care more and more about each of them. Please continue with your stories, and good luck on all your future endevors.
Bainsidhe
and just like the other chapters to your story, it is very well written out as well as played out
Thanks very much for the next chapter. Very good, and definitely enjoying the level of character interaction and development.
Take as long as you need to make each chapter the best it can be!
I was worried for a bit that you might have stopped writing. I'm glad I was wrong. Great story, keep it up!
Glad to see that your still writing, was wondering if you might of had some trouble cause of writing it. I look forward to each new chapter and though the wait for the latest chapter has been long, it has been worth it.
Great story all around.
Thanks
it's great to see you back again . . another wonderful chapter :-) . . and it is easy to understand how things can get hectic and wanting the story to be "right" . . keep up the great work, each chap makes it worth looking forward to the next one :-)
It is good to see you back writing this wonderful series. I have checked from time to time waiting for the next part of this series. Thank you and keep up the good work.
Another great chapter. Hope you did well in the exams keep up the good work :)
This was a fun chapter but seemed more like filler to me. They were in this exact situation with almost exactly the same reactions a few chapters ago. Other than the bright idea to check out the ship, not much happened. Hopefully there will be more action in the next chapter.
Another great chapter. Hopefully this time you will not be absent as long as the last time.. :D
I just got hooked on this series - it's wonderful! I'm totally engaged with the characters and the story. I just hope the next chapter doesn't take too long! :) Thank you!
It does't satisfy my thirst, it fuels it! I want to know if there are more human male/Alien catgirl stories out there?
It's good to see you back writing. For a while I thought you had given up.
I just liked this chapter so much. Playful and inspired. Please keep going.
This is a great series, can't wait to see it develop more and how their relationship continues to evolve
I finished reading through the story not too long ago, and I'm quite taken with it; in particular I enjoy the depth of the characters, the subtlety of some of their interactions, and especially all the references Kita's culture. Combine this with the adventure to be had in just surviving on this strange world, and it's a story which will have me coming back for more.
Excellent story you've got going here. The characters are sympathetic and relatable and the evolution of their relationship is both believable and interesting. I like the world you’ve created for them, or rather the universe. The sexual tension has been incredibly enjoyable up until this point and I’ve never once caught myself thinking ‘oh just get it over with already!’ which obviously means you have a great talent for storytelling as well as sex-telling. All around five stars and I can’t wait to see where you go with all this. Favourite moments include their first meeting and their night under the covers together. I understand from your posts that you have some trouble posting as often as you’d like? Well if you ever need any help or more importantly some cheerleading to remind you just how awesome this is then drop me a line through Lit.
All in all, as the title says, fucking superb!
Lien Geller
I hate finding series that are in the process of being written. Then you have to wait for the author and the suspense is killing me. Gah! Great series so far. I'm absolutely in love with it.
I fully blame your writing talent from preventing me to sleep, eat normally, do HW or play video games... Damn you!
Eric is really fit for the Darwin Award it seems ^^
About the comment on survival training and forgetting the weapon - he's a bloody medic. He probably had basic training at best. His in depth training would be on medical concentration under distress. Case in point, the first chapter. Eric searched his own wreckage for his medical supplies and reluctantly brought weapons. Even when grabbed by Kita, he resorted to using the sedative rather than a weapon, reaffirming the thought he has intense medic training, not firearms and survival.
As for Kita, she even said the wreckage was on fire, therefore she didn't search for weapons.
I'm reading through the rest of your works after getting hooked on The Missing Dragon, and I am loving every paragraph. Please continue telling whatever stories come to mind, you have an excellent talent!
Playful, interesting and developing the characters at the same time.
Love the humor and how their tension builds while each questions their preconceived notions against their feelings.
Enough fancy talk, this is outstanding.
Did you have to make him such an idiot. He may be a medic, but all medics go through thorough military training. He's off with the fairies half the time.
Women, one little fuck up, and they never let you forget it. Lovin this series. On to more.