All Comments on 'Lindsey's Job Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Hmm..... have you thought about an editor?

Not a bad story with interesting sex but your spelling & grammar is aweful. I can't believe somebody hasn't picked this up before

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