by Harper_nolack1
I agree this is a GREAT beginning! Would love for the older man to bring some of his buddies with him next time.
You need part 2 of this story. Maybe a little anal for the young girl.
Mr. Oh Ms. "Rape is rape" go read the Bible. Oh wait there is rape in the Bible and murder and deceit etc.
This is the non consensual section. Go look it up.
Since this story is over 12 years old there is no hope that the author will return. However I thoroughly enjoyed it despite the glaring flaws. But was still hot, captured the shirt non consent part without violence and gratuitous vulgarity.