All Comments on 'Public in Private'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

could be the start of a great series...

sexynechristinesexynechristineover 13 years ago
I agree!

I agree this is a GREAT beginning! Would love for the older man to bring some of his buddies with him next time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Awesome

Fantastic story! Please continue this!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
story 2

You need part 2 of this story. Maybe a little anal for the young girl.

buttcheeks777buttcheeks777about 12 years ago
Yes on anal

I agree, she needs some anal as well. Please add part 2!

BlackjacketfreakBlackjacketfreakover 6 years ago
More

Please write a follow up

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Rape

Rape is rape, and always disgusting

merrySMmerrySMover 1 year ago

Mr. Oh Ms. "Rape is rape" go read the Bible. Oh wait there is rape in the Bible and murder and deceit etc.

This is the non consensual section. Go look it up.

Since this story is over 12 years old there is no hope that the author will return. However I thoroughly enjoyed it despite the glaring flaws. But was still hot, captured the shirt non consent part without violence and gratuitous vulgarity.

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