All Comments on 'Pool Payments Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
That's different.

A slut husband story and a slut wife story rolled into one.

annanovaannanovaalmost 14 years ago
curious

Is this the same Beth from your previous series?

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 14 years ago
Blow jobs could hold him off for a while

But he'll soon need some more of that sweet pussy, that's what I'm waiting for.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
So, she's a whore?

Just wondered.

But no spelling errors. That's good.

DirtyTykeDirtyTykealmost 11 years ago
Thanks

I'm reading this story again for the second time.

While short it's hot and well written.

On to the next chapter in the series. :-)

I love your stories!

(Especially The Accidental Nudist Cabin, and The perfect Game)

skyink93skyink93about 9 years ago
As always, you are a great writer

I can not read further because of a personal bias. I despise cheaters. However that does not preclude me from admiring your work. Thank you for sharing your talent.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Double Standard

You`re a great writer, in terms of crafting engaging stories with very hot sex scenes

I can`t help but notice, though, that your male characters are deeply offended when their wives cheat on them, yet they will bang any female who holds still long enough. Any man who tries to seduce his wife deserves a beating - or death - but it`s perfectly OK if he fucks every one of his wife`s friends and all of the neighbors. Of course, his wife usually wants to join in. So does her sister, and her mother.

Really ...

tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey2110over 5 years ago
A new twist

I like the variety of scenarios that you present. Your stories covers affairs of both husbands and wives. Some turn out positive, some not. Some are down right dark.

As always the sex is hot. A 4* rating.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Yeah, his life may have just changed for the better.

I wonder, though, what his wife, working ten hour days, might think.

dgfergiedgfergieabout 2 years ago

I hope its not a cheating husband story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

great story; great series. don't like the finale tho (the last chapter) .I think that it spoils the whole idea. Also, I didn't like the addition of the wifes girlfriend to the story

oldtwitoldtwitover 1 year ago

Loved it, nice simple and clean in the way you have written it

Baqfid12Baqfid12about 1 year ago

Hot, sexy, fun and quick

blackknight314blackknight31411 months ago

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

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