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smoothboismoothboialmost 14 years ago

I liked how you looked for a wedding band first. I do that too. Nice touch of keeping it real!

dirtykinkyslutdirtykinkyslutalmost 14 years agoAuthor
Thanks

It was the first time I've written a complete fiction based on a guys point of view, so I'm hoping I've got it right...

hellwynhellwynover 13 years ago
Excellent

You got the man's point of view just right here.

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