by Shady_Lady
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 33,000 poems.
Really strong rhythm here -- draws you so far in you feel her just waiting for her victim to walk thru the door. EM
This reminds me of poetry we'd read in high school -- it just seems to have such a catchy beat to it that I can't get it out of my head! CP
Reading this I can hear an old style clock ticking away in the way these words move.
I can see her point - sometimes, after some of my dates, I'd like to dispatch them in this fun way. Uncomplicated relationships.