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And The Clock Went Tick

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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz10/30/06

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A most excellent poetic tale.

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by LeBroz12/28/06

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 33,000 poems.

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by duddle14601/27/07

Tick tock

A rendering about a murder ~ done with clock-like precision.

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by EmJ038504/10/07

Homicide on her mind---

Really strong rhythm here -- draws you so far in you feel her just waiting for her victim to walk thru the door. EM

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by CaPic26704/11/07

Wow!!

This reminds me of poetry we'd read in high school -- it just seems to have such a catchy beat to it that I can't get it out of my head! CP

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by OSoBuff04/12/07

It's like an old style clock

Reading this I can hear an old style clock ticking away in the way these words move.

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by PatHous5604/16/07

Hmmmm

I can see her point - sometimes, after some of my dates, I'd like to dispatch them in this fun way. Uncomplicated relationships.

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