All Comments on 'Please Ch. 02'

I just love this story. Please continue it. I want her to go out with him, so that she could get to know him better.

Great start.

Five.

SOOOO GOOD! love it

But ohhh so good, can't wait for the next part.

Yea, I want this to continue. Please!!!

oh so good! another one of my favs ty ty ty

Absolutely fantastic! I cannot wait to see what happens next...Bravo elledee to a job WELL done!

I am going to ask if you will continue this series, or add more to what you have already given us to chew on???

i hope you finish this story

Do it! Go out with him!!!!

This story is really intriguing, you have to continue. This is one of the best stories i have read on this site, please continue.

"Well first off, I don't have an accent" LOL!

OMG you HAVE TO finish this story. HAVE TO! And it's not even that I'm a sucker for interracial, it's that this is one of the best stories here....just really amazingly sexy but sweet at the same time. MORE!

Pleaseeee finish ? ( no pun intended )

Please finish!

Uh uh hello finish this great story

omg this is one of the hottest stories I've read, come back soon

Tag this story: black woman, so I can find it again!!! I'm in love!

I WISH I HAD A MICHAEL. LOL. PLEASE CONTINUE. THIS IS A VERY GOOD START. LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE.

I fucking hate authors like you on Literotica, who post great, A+, fantastic, 5 star worthy stories and don't even fucking finish them. This story is amazing so far and you just leave us hanging like this ElleDee? You should be so ashamed that you finish this story. We're growing impatient motherfucker! -B

It makes your story look cheap and amateurish. If you want to show extreme confusion, describe it. If you want to covey a lot of happiness, elaborate! Throwing a bunch of exclamation marks and question marks doesn't make me understand what they're feeling, it just makes me think the author is lazy.

Same thing with the ellipses. There's only three dots in an ellipsis. Adding more not only makes grammatically incorrect, but it adds to destroying the reader experience.

Your story isn't bad at all, but these are simple mistakes.

I want more!!!! 💜💜 it