All Comments on 'Hard Way'

I particularly liked the last paragraph. Even though there was not much of sex. It was a good read.

So romantic! Nice story

I stopped at the first sentence to write this feedback. The first sentence doesn't make sense. It's not grammatically correct. So many of these Literotica stories need editing. It may seem like I'm being "nit-picky," but it really makes a difference! The first sentence reads, "Having spent the last two weeks since leaving college in Ohio slowly realizing that my options are severely limited." As it is, it's actually a very long introductory clause, and therefore an incomplete sentence. It should be, :"In the last two weeks since leaving college in Ohio, I slowly realized that my options are severely limited."