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Anonymousalmost 14 years agoPick a tense, any tense
And then stay with it. I got whiplash reading this.
Not to mention the writing was pretty bad, generally.
andtheendalmost 14 years agoCongratulations
Your story was chosen for highlighting in the Story Feedback section under the ANDTHEEND thread, post #258.
I gave you a 5 vote for your effort.
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