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Somebody's Mother

bya_bent_ampersand©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/06/10

This story goes all over the place - skanky hair dressers, weird woman and preppy boy.
Have wasted 10 minutes of my life reading this crap!

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by Anonymous07/06/10

great story

I actually thought it was a great story. Keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous07/06/10

Intense

I thought it was an original and intense story. Im hoping there is more to come.

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by Anonymous07/06/10

Its got legs and promise.

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by Anonymous07/06/10

Outstanding

Outstanding. If O Henry wrote erotica, he would have written this. Although complete as is, please continue the story anyway.

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by Anonymous07/06/10

Heavy ending

Nicely done with an unexpected ending. Lots of options for a sequel.

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by al_Ussa07/10/10

Sexy Hairstylist

That's one of my personal fantasies too! I loved this story. Very sexy and well-written. I give it five stars! Keep up the good work man.

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by Privates1stClass07/16/10

Interesting twist

You caught me off guard, a_bent_ampersand. Didn't see the ending coming, and it was great. Good luck in the contest.

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by Anonymous07/23/10

Great story

the story was great but I kind of saw the ending coming. It's still worthy of a sequel though. Keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous07/24/10

better

so much better than Stay at home...... This was actually believable, the ending is probably similar to some peoples experiences. Who hasn't put on an old jacket not worn for a couple of years and then found $50 in a pocket or a lost ring etc.

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