All Comments on 'Jack's Needs Ch. 02'

This girl seems to like it which means she is a bit twisted herself. Jack should invite some friends to enjoy her also

So at the end, Jack makes her lick the cum off his cock...putting his cock in her mouth...and AFTER that he takes the tape off her lips??? Great story until that discontinuity ground the gears in my brain! haha

Never have I overlooked something as big as that. I always read my stories and fix all the errors. I'm really sorry for the mess up. And yes, he was supposed to take the tape off before. Thank you for the help!

I messed up guys. I'm really sorry :/

I don't know but I kinda liked it and I would like to read more. :)

Love the strong characters int this piece,but at certain parts you lose track of what your writing.For example you say in the story that jack made sophie lick his cock clean,how is that possible when two sentences later you say her mouth is taped shut.Its just little things like that,which can make or break you story.

One of the best stories ever

I loved the story. Write more