All Comments on 'Pool Payments Ch. 04'

The summer is not over give us more. I love the way you write.

Your writing is impeccable, I commend you sir.

Awesome story

The struggle in an affair between fun and serious attraction and hurting your spouse is an important part. You balance the fun and serious sides well.

great story,great series

Hhmmmpf,So So. LP

Another great follow up

Fully enjoying this, trying to figure out how and why my stories in the category can not measure up and it's easy to figure out. So many layers and you carefully unfold each one right in front of or our eyes

Loved it, great writing!

I enjoyed the first 3 parts, but at the end of the 4th part, I suddenly thought about what I would have been saying about Alex if this was written from the POV of Beth or Lisa’s husband. He is the sort of low life, cheating, scum that we would want to see punished. I really hope that his cheating ways will catch up with him.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!