Wonderfully familiar. Very well written. I like how the female lead, Jess, is so proactive. Though I think there's a line once reached that the dynamic would change. The hero become the aggressor.
I'm a passionate amateur writer who doesn't have time to properly finish any of her work. Therefore I decided to fulfill my "quickie" fix, with a few naughty stories for here. Sometimes these are clips from books I never finish. Let me know what you think sometime.