You built a decent mature/loving wives/erotic couplings stroke story. I know, this is Lit, sometimes all folks want is a good stroke story. This story needed emotional resonance. Judy's in the mood for strange who just happens to pick up her nephew. Tab A goes into Slot B. Orgasms ensue, everyone (including the audience) takes a restorative nap.
If you want to write better incest stories, work with the emotions around such a taboo affair. You don't just boink your sister or auntie because, why? IRL, If you did it and admitted it or were caught at it, people would think you're sick puppies. I didn't get why this was on the menu and a blase matter for both of them to go past a fierce social taboo.
Why did Judy pick John and not, say Nick the bartender, or Phil the alto sax player at the bar? What was special about him beyond he happened to be her nephew? Answer those questions in away that makes the audience care, and you've got a good incest story.
This story could have been hotter, but it lacks emotional balance between the two characters, John & Judy. First of all, you have Judy admitting that she doesn't usually use a word like "fucking". She "makes love" but she doesn't fuck. But then, she allows her horniness to overcome her judgement and commit adultery, but not with just anyone though; she invites her nephew into her gutter. That turns her on so much that she just overflows with her "dirty mouth" to John, telling him all her "dirty words" because she's not making love; finally she's fucking! She's very emotional! Here's my question: How come you didn't have John expressing the same kind of words, feelings, and emotions? The way you wrote the story, it reads and feels like John's cock is there, but John is almost missing. In fact, it kind of sounds like a cock named John appeared but the person weilding it has no name. Get what I mean? I hope so.
i am dying to fuck my big titted auntie
I think your story was very arousing and HOT !! Now we need to know what Auntie and John want to do next ?? Let young and hung show Auntie what else he can do and then she can show him what he needs to learn !! Thank you.
I was 16 yrs old and my mum's sister 38.She is still a very beautiful woman,though married with 2 children.she has a body like Scarlett Johansson,with dark hair and grey eyes.I shall never forget the first time I fucked her 2 years ago.We had all been in a wedding of one of our cousins.My aunt Rachel had drunk more than it should be and had preferred to stay at my parents' place,while her husband had to go back home because he had an important meeting the day after with one of his clients.As the only place where she could sleep was in my bed.It was normal as very often we slept in the same bed when I was a kid.I was amazed when she took off her dress and bra ,leaving only her beautiful black satin string.I must tell you that since I was was 12,I used to jerk my cock,thinking of her and I cannot count the number of cums I had,between 13 to 16.She turned to say goodnight and she missed my cheek amd met my lips instead.We were both shocked and I can tell you that up to now,I have never kissed such sweet lips.We french kissed and french kissed and when I put my finger in her slip,I introduced one,then two fingers in her pussy.God,she was as wet as a river!!She started to moan and she rose and took my hard cock in her mouth.She then sat on my mouth and I sucked her big vagina's lips and drank all her moisture,Then she sat on my big cock and fucked me like an animal!!However,she could not cry,fearing being caught by my parents.She had to suck 3 of my fingers.After 15 mins,I sent about 8 jets of my thick cum in her pussy.We fucked till 5 am!!Since then,we meet either in motels or when she is alone home.I can tell you that up to now I have not been able to meet a girl who could match with my aunt Rachel.
Every nephew's fantasy fucking the guts out of their aunty. It sure is one of mine.
I really enjoyed this story and have not over analysed it. It had me aroused all the way through. It's pity there isn't an auto scroll feature as I had to keep clicking the mouse!
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