All Comments on 'Happy Life with My Father-in-Law Ch. 02'

Could not read much of it as the language is really spoiling any goodness that may be there! For goodness sake and ours, get a bloody editor!

Grammar. Word Use. Spelling. Piece of crap.

I got through a few paragraphs and had to stop. it's awful. I don't understands why writers don't use the spell check. It doesn't help when writers submit stories in English when English is not their first language. People PLEASE STOP. Or at ;east have someone check it for you!

An interesting situation. Mona should care for her child first and when Rand is gone; screw her FIL as much as she can and then let it go until the next visit. Maybe, Mona should tell Rand she will help her FIL with chores and keep the screwing away from her home? Hot in any event. Thanks.