All Comments on 'On the Beach'

Better than I expected, actually.

I really liked it! Very original. My only critique would be your grammar. A little more proof reading would do it wonders. Regardless I really thought it was great!

... arousing!!!! Thank you very much for a fabulous story. It fits very close with some of my many fantasies. I hope to find more of your work.

Girls have seen my tiny dick at the beach

Nicely written. Makes the reader want more. At least this reader wants more.

I really enjoyed this little story. It’s enough and complete all by itself. It could be a part of a much longer one of course, one as sort of an interlude between a longer writing detailing Jamie’s growing up, family life, dating, and marriage, and, after this interlude, the rest of Jamie’s life. Will he enter the dating scene again? Would he marry again? What would the girl be like that would marry him? Will this event teach him anything? J.

Perfect!