I hope you will keep going with this one, I'm interested to find out more.
You are clearly not just cranking out another-by-the-numbers tale like so many of these undead stories. I will be interested in seeing what turn you take with it. Good luck!
Very interesting so far. I hope you'll write more about them. I'm very curious to see what will happen next.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!
please do continue
i hope you keep on working on this, it was a great start, and i was interested in who the other vampires were and why there was such animosity between Caine and the other head guy. i admit though, i didn't know Vampire could have brothers, not in the physical sense, but i have a feeling that he is. am i right?
I love your stories. Keep going. I would love to see how this story developes.
It's a great start. I'd love to see how the characters develop more and where you go from here!
Great start, you've really caught my interest. I'd love to see where this story goes.
Really looking forward to finding out what she is. More please!
...absolutely, must keep writing it. Great beginning!
would love to see this develop! great job so far!
Yeah.. Really want to know what's happening with the sisters.. And looking forward to more of your work
The title is cute. I like vamps and werewolf stories so I had to check it out. I look forward to finding out what she is. It seemed almost like she could bring him back to life. It must've been hard for him to feel that and have it taken away. Keep writing!
Interesting plot so far, I am REALLY curious to see where this goes. Keep writing! :)
Love The Story.
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