All Comments on 'Making Me His'

by everso1969

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
It's a start

It's a good start. It doesn't seem like it's over, there should be more.

b1essed_serenityb1essed_serenityover 13 years ago
Good Start

Would love to hear more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Why is there no sequel of this?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Yeah, I am really turned on, what happens next

Yeah, I am really turned on, what happens next

dinkybootsdinkybootsalmost 12 years ago

O pass me a bucket.?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
hot story

very hot story nade my cock so hard i am straight not gay but after reading this story i am not sure i think i want to suck a cock i would to meet a man like tim so i could suck him dry

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

I'm a woman but gay stories turn me on sooo much

BigGayRobBigGayRobover 10 years ago
Really needs a sequel

This is an excellent story that got me hard quickly and kept me hard - only to leave me hanging at the end. everso1969 - if you are still around I sincerely hope you'll post a sequel to this story. I could really relate to the main character, and I am dying to know how you intended to continue this.

Other than the lack of a real ending to the tale, I highly recommend this story, especially if you are discovering a submissive side yourself. It's well written, and very hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Excellent Story

Wow!!! This is an extremely hot story. I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Fifty Shades of Submissive:

This almost a stereotypical kind of sub relationship. I've been sub for a few guys, but you can be sub in so many subtle ways besides being a bottom and an active cocksucker. Being nude below the waist when you sleep with your partner, whether you're going to have sex or not, is sub. Giving your partner the keys to your car so he can drive when you go out, is sub. Wearing what your partner wants you to wear is sub. Having your partner order for your at dinner, and paying for it, is sub. And so on!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Making me.........

Submissive or a cuck does it really matter? I see it the same in many ways. I used to love having other guys have sex with my X wife. Once I got comfortable sucking cock, I was always available to either of two guys. One when he could get away the other whenever he wanted or needed me. I loved it both ways.

Haphaestion2004Haphaestion2004over 9 years ago

Hmmm ! Made me wet ...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

now I want to suck a cock that was an awesome story....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Me to

I would love to be a sub bitch to a guy sucking him anytime or place he told me to

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Could have been a 5

I'm not usually the spelling or grammar police but the many misspellings in this were very annoying. Other than that it was a great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
so so hot...

Love the concept behind the story and the story itself!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice

I can relate to this story very much. I've been a submissive cocksucker as long as I can remember. Nothing is as exciting as a real man taking you and making you please him...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great story

I am a submissive cock sucker who would love to find a man just like this to serve. I live in Pennsylvania and it is very hard ti find a man to take charge of a sub like me if anyone has a suggestion for me you can e-mail me at Brenda_sub17331@yahoo.com thanks for the great story keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
it's not fair!!

I'm another submissive cocksucker.

There should be more dominating cock suckees to pair up with us!

A LOT more dominating cock suckees.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I am 90% Heterosexual; But

The other 10% likes sucking on a cock; some thing I haven't had a chance to do for too many years. Would like to be the submissive, to be used, told what to do, called all the appropriate names and be ordered to accept penis discharge(s) into my waiting mouth.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
shemale

I met my boy in friend gay bar,with in week I had move in with him,and suck hs cock,

he make

his girlfriend,and make dress as girl all the time,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Wow!

Wow! Tim really dominated him didn't he?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I'm your's

I fantasize about being on my knees and saying please let me suck your cock and him cum in my mouth . I would love to be someone's personal cock sucker

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
like me

my boyfriend tells me how to suck his cock and how to dress all the time,

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wow!

Wow! Tim really dominated him didn’t he?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Submitting

There is something special about submitting. He wanted to so much even the name calling did not matter. He still obeyed. He still wanted to do it more. Someday I fantasize that someone will make me his boy. I think that I would not like it but would still want to serve him so I would have to be his sucker no matter what he says. Just to receive the reward that #I want so much.

Rwa4768Rwa4768over 4 years ago
Great story

I loved the story. That's the kind of man I would like to find, one that would dominate me but be discreet about it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
God And Jesus

God and Jesus both suck on each other's cock everyday and swallow too. Go figure.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I liked it very much, since I am submissive and like to be used it appeals to me in a big way !

Peter

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The man always knows before you know. Another truism is you haven't had a girl in a while and the prospects are not good so you think why not. Then the kiss. Oh yes. 4yourpleasureiam

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

been better if he had took his ass

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I loved it. Read it with my daddy Benner’s cock in my hand. And at the end of your story he came down my throat. I love his hard dick with all my heart. He loves having me eat my cum while I stare at his manhood. He’s so yummy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good story, liked the way the character progressed. Would like to see more. Wish someone would let me learn on them, but I would take it all in!

daveflydaveflyabout 2 years ago

i’d be camping outside his house waiting out the time to sucking his cock

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

My next door neighbor in So Fl. Carlos was a beautiful boy and his sister, Maria was absolutely gorgeous. Spent much time in Maria’s bedroom. I was doing everything Maria asked me. Put me in make up and she also made up Carlos. She had us wear her panties. I thought Maria was hot for me but that wasn’t the plan. Carlos was driving the relationship. Maria would leave Carlos and I alone in our make up, our jewelry It was them Carlos and I. Kissed and fondled each other. We eventually met in Carlos’ room and would make up each other. Carlos became my girlfriend. A girlfriend with a dick . I didn’t want Maria or any female. For that matter. Carlina is my only love. He and I share our sperm. Maria would would bring her friends to essentially watch Carlina and I make male love. In the missionary position his ankles on my shoulder, tongues the mouth but my sperm is in his bowels. When we’re not fuckin , Carlina sucks my cock

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