All Comments on 'After the Party'

You could have made this into a 3 or 4 page hot story. But instead you cut it short. Shame on you

A hot little number is a great start to a day.

the last paragraph. It should have been a single sentence similar to "Hands down, it was the most awesome weekend of his college career."

I just wish we had more information the rest of the day.

Nice to hear about a young man willing to try things with a young woman for HER gratification instead of wham bam thank you ma'am!

Nice little story about a nice guy who never has to finish last!

Very cute enjoyable short story. Thanks.

Ah the joys of extracurricular activities in college for a young man willing to put his whole self into it! A well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading more of your work. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.