by bronston22
You've foreshadowed it, you've built it up, keep it running to the next place.
you built the first story so well. Part 2 was a bit wham bam. Love to read some more but take your time and build the story again.
I don't think you put as much effort and talent into chapter 2 as you did 1. Hope you have chapter 3 started but please take your time and make it work.
man what a great story it was fantastice kee p writing about it and i will keep on reading these stories
If we are disappointed can you imagine what she was feeling?
Excerpt from the story (SPOILER ALERT):
... She lay back and wiggled herself into position with her knees up and her ass on the very edge of the bed. She reached down and pulled her panties to the side. In the full light of the room I could see her pussy and I instinctively put my hand to it. Her wetness caused my middle fingers to slide into her. I moved them in and out until she grabbed my cock and...
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Interesting story-probably could have put the whole thing in one story-it's only two pages in total. Ignore the people complaining about disappointment, etc. The reality is, a lot of how these things actually happen isn't nearly as exciting as you'd think, and rarely are they the way they're written in many of the stories on Lit. It's not always mind blowing sex, in fact, a lot of the time, it's lackluster sex, but there's no sex that isn't good :-) It is often a result of opportunity with someone you don't think you'll ever have a chance with, and that unexpected nature of it always makes it better. It was what it was.
That said, Mrs. James seems to have a drinking problem. I don't think she was without a drink ever in these two stories.