All Comments on 'Lt. Gordon's Transformation Ch. 08'

Really enjoyed this!

I love this story so far! I feel it has an intelligent and imaginative plot with the right proportion of sex mixed in that doesn't overload the story. The wording has the correct feel for the Trek universe and it doesn't hurt that "Relics" is my favorite of the Next Generation episodes that I've seen. I also like that the story takes place on the author's own ship with the author's own characters rather than just borrowing the series characters. I can hardly wait to read what happens next.

I hope Jamie's relationship with Carol will continue even though he/she is branching out. Do I see a possible threesome in the works?

The potential of this story is endless. The Dyson Sphere has so many secrets. The manicured landscape makes me wonder if there is an automated maintenance. Or is the sphere not uninhabited after all and the population was waiting out the radiation in shelters that were missed in the scans.

Well Done! And please do continue!!

In the future of space travel that we will not use the metric system for measuring cocks.

"She grasped her hand around the nine inches of throbbing meat and opened her mouth."

Nine inches of throbbing meat sound so much better than 22.86 centimeters of throbbing man meat.

Still nice