All Comments on 'Miss C's Pet'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Amazing!

I'm sitting here, a little dumbfounded. Have you been digging around in my mind? Discovering what I need / want / crave? Seeing this all written out, I feel exposed, in a very, very good way. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good story and descriptions- a bit gentle

This is a good story and shows some realistic elements. A good beginning but a little to gentle. Next step is to increase level of strictness and superiority. keep writing you are on the right track.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

i almost came just by reading this really good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
mmmmm...

most delightful! as a switch, i can identify with both sides - love your description, the sweetness, the intimacy. please write more...

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