by FenrisDottir
I'm sitting here, a little dumbfounded. Have you been digging around in my mind? Discovering what I need / want / crave? Seeing this all written out, I feel exposed, in a very, very good way. Thank you for sharing.
This is a good story and shows some realistic elements. A good beginning but a little to gentle. Next step is to increase level of strictness and superiority. keep writing you are on the right track.
most delightful! as a switch, i can identify with both sides - love your description, the sweetness, the intimacy. please write more...