that says it all, more please, and don't stop until the bellies of those who read this story are full
I have to say again... NOT just another damned vampire story. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Each chapter draws me in and leaves me wanting more. I love the tug of war of strength and vulnerability in Sophie and the battle between human and monster in Caine. Despite the dichotomy, he is smoking hot and they are awesome together. When can we get the next chapter????
for the next chapter!!
I am enjoying the story alot. I just was a little surprised because this man tells her that he is deciding whether to kill her and her innocent sisters. Next thing she knows she is making out with him? Then she just leaves without addressing the issue? It just felt a little off to me. All the same, the story is a good one and I will look out for the next chapter.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
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