All Comments on 'Starlit Night'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
First rate story!

Both romantic and arousing!

lakesailer_milakesailer_miover 13 years ago
Beautifl

You capture the emotion so well. Her desire, her longing...not simply just sex, but more. Yet, really hot too...

geronimo_applebygeronimo_applebyover 13 years ago
Sweet moment.

the brevity added to the sweetness of this for me. one minor point - a purely personal preference - maybe break up the paragraphs a little?

a great read and a job well done all the same. xx

hairball18hairball18over 13 years ago
wow

Can I sit in the chair beside you?

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