All Comments on 'Sex Club for College Students'

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txboyalonetxboyaloneover 13 years ago
The Basics

Love the story, it is so nice to get back to the basics and read a real life story. Characters are believable and very realistic. Innocent and charming. I stayed hard all the way to the end. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Mark

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
critique

I agree totally. It's good to read a story about characters who are actually human. Outstanding effort for a first time out.

michassmichassover 13 years ago
nice first story

a bit too much like the nerds and geeks story running on here. Most girls don't think about inches much one way or the other, size maybe, just not measurements.

softkissessoftkissesover 13 years ago
Absolutely loved it!

Now, where was this club when I was in college!!!

I agree with the others, this is a very well written story. The character interaction is very real and I'll be interested to see if Calie enjoys all of her future dates equally or if Matt turns out to be something special!

Many FeathersMany Feathersover 13 years ago
Nicely done

And yes...certainly continue on with this one. Am quite enjoying this new writer. Looking forward to reading more

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
college club

excellant stoty. please do more.

marklionmarklionover 13 years ago
Good First Story!!!

You wrote a very good first story from the female perspective. I read the story that you were referring to and your story is just as good as his was. I would love to see another chapter with Calie and Heather. Keep up the good work. Mark

DragosLoveDragosLoveover 13 years ago
Fabulous first try.

Looking foward to seeing more from you!

24chas24chasover 13 years ago
Nice job

Really enjoyed this story. It took me back to my own college days. Oh, if only there was a club like that back then. I'd love to read more with these characters.

Way to represent Raleigh as well! Nice to read a story from a fellow Raleighite.

hongluobohongluoboover 13 years ago
Have to agree with MF

wonderful story... wonderful build up.. great description... and like all the others.. wow, if only i could join a club like that!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

great story... loved the buildup.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great story

Great job for your first outing. Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
A very good read

I would really love to trade places with Matt.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice job!

Great story! Your writing is very realistic and descriptive, I enjoyed it very much!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great!!!

Cant wait to read more of this story!!!

BamahoBamahoover 13 years ago
Don't stop writing!!!!!!

If this is your first attempt at writing erotica, damn I can't wait to read you in a year of two! Keep this story going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Excellent Story!!!

Very believable, well paced, plenty of room for additional chapters and developing other characters. Please write chapter 2!!!

vikingsiddhuvikingsiddhuover 12 years ago
Good story but not a first time

Hi the story is good but i am not sure if it should be in first time categoy

smnIndianasmnIndianaover 12 years ago
Great Job

Loved your story. Wish there was really a club like that when I was in college.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great story

Loved the whole idea behind it. Very unusual, but still believable. Good characters and hot scenes. Definitely a story to build on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice theme - something good I can related to

Nice story.. keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
What series is it based on?

Could someone please link the original series this is based on? I can't find it anywhere!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
dross

totally *&%$

wagonet2wagonet2over 3 years ago

You write very well! I look forward to more stories! Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I found it nice good flow. One would imagine a true story of life as a college student

jewelya8789jewelya8789over 1 year ago

For consensual sex, the word assault doesn’t feel right. Way too much baggage. I enjoyed everything but that.

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