by RaleighBoy
Love the story, it is so nice to get back to the basics and read a real life story. Characters are believable and very realistic. Innocent and charming. I stayed hard all the way to the end. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Mark
I agree totally. It's good to read a story about characters who are actually human. Outstanding effort for a first time out.
a bit too much like the nerds and geeks story running on here. Most girls don't think about inches much one way or the other, size maybe, just not measurements.
Now, where was this club when I was in college!!!
I agree with the others, this is a very well written story. The character interaction is very real and I'll be interested to see if Calie enjoys all of her future dates equally or if Matt turns out to be something special!
And yes...certainly continue on with this one. Am quite enjoying this new writer. Looking forward to reading more
You wrote a very good first story from the female perspective. I read the story that you were referring to and your story is just as good as his was. I would love to see another chapter with Calie and Heather. Keep up the good work. Mark
Really enjoyed this story. It took me back to my own college days. Oh, if only there was a club like that back then. I'd love to read more with these characters.
Way to represent Raleigh as well! Nice to read a story from a fellow Raleighite.
wonderful story... wonderful build up.. great description... and like all the others.. wow, if only i could join a club like that!!
Great story! Your writing is very realistic and descriptive, I enjoyed it very much!
If this is your first attempt at writing erotica, damn I can't wait to read you in a year of two! Keep this story going!
Very believable, well paced, plenty of room for additional chapters and developing other characters. Please write chapter 2!!!
Hi the story is good but i am not sure if it should be in first time categoy
Loved your story. Wish there was really a club like that when I was in college.
Loved the whole idea behind it. Very unusual, but still believable. Good characters and hot scenes. Definitely a story to build on.
Could someone please link the original series this is based on? I can't find it anywhere!
I found it nice good flow. One would imagine a true story of life as a college student
For consensual sex, the word assault doesn’t feel right. Way too much baggage. I enjoyed everything but that.