Really nice and well written story. It had good, believable characters and a good flow to it. Was a little bit long, but definitely made up for it.
I'd love to read more in the series with the same characters.
Alan got Marie within minutes of the payoff of the so-called BT. Dirk, having no clue what was happening, is teased far longer. Plus, greeks are all so lame and full of themselves.
definately a mind clearing experience ;-)
or college memories? Who cares? Does every college have a guy named Tank? Mine did. I know. He was me. Good story. Thanks.
The story was neither fantasy nor memories, but (loosely) based on a story bouncing around the frat quad. We all liked to believe something like this could really happen!
As always- thanks for all the comments- good and bad. It helps me know what you like and why. I won't necessarily change my writing based on it, but it helps on occasion.
Great characters, great plot and fairly realistic. Enjoyed it very much
great story! wish it would have ended with linda getting fucked instead of just eve. either way very nice job!
I love this story so very much. Your protagonists have a tendency to be lucky bastards, but you make it so that their getting together -and staying together- with the girls makes plenty of sense. Here's to high-quality characters!
It was a great read and got my juices flowing.
I followed all the twists and turns in your story, and in the end, it turned out great (pun intended). I enjoy your stories--always interesting.
Love the story. But having only 2 comment lines on page 4 is kinda weird. Hope you add more; I think this can be rolled out further
Great story. Loved the whole situation. Next installment/chapter has Linda getting hers, D getting through Pledging to become the full member the girls want him to be. I hope!
Great humor, great sexual tension, and as always, a great build up and payoff for the reader.
A very good story with a good build up :) maybe even a sequel would be apropriate
nice stories, loved the backstory, a sequel would be nice
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