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The Big Tease

byTx Tall Tales©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/14/10

Really nice and well written story. It had good, believable characters and a good flow to it. Was a little bit long, but definitely made up for it.
I'd love to read more in the series with the same characters.

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by EspressoBolus08/14/10

What tease?

Alan got Marie within minutes of the payoff of the so-called BT. Dirk, having no clue what was happening, is teased far longer. Plus, greeks are all so lame and full of themselves.

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by Nameday08/14/10

mmm

definately a mind clearing experience ;-)

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by Scorpio4408/14/10

College fantasy

or college memories? Who cares? Does every college have a guy named Tank? Mine did. I know. He was me. Good story. Thanks.

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by Tx Tall Tales08/17/10

Thanks for the comments

The story was neither fantasy nor memories, but (loosely) based on a story bouncing around the frat quad. We all liked to believe something like this could really happen!

As always- thanks for all the comments- good and bad. It helps me know what you like and why. I won't necessarily change my writing based on it, but it helps on occasion.

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by Anonymous08/18/10

Good read

Great characters, great plot and fairly realistic. Enjoyed it very much

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by Anonymous12/29/10

abrupt ending

great story! wish it would have ended with linda getting fucked instead of just eve. either way very nice job!

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by Anonymous02/01/11

I love this story so very much. Your protagonists have a tendency to be lucky bastards, but you make it so that their getting together -and staying together- with the girls makes plenty of sense. Here's to high-quality characters!

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by Anonymous03/07/11

The Greatest Sexfest Ever

It was a great read and got my juices flowing.

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by Privates1stClass04/09/11

The Big Tease was more fun than I expected

I followed all the twists and turns in your story, and in the end, it turned out great (pun intended). I enjoy your stories--always interesting.

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by Anonymous05/04/11

Love the story. But having only 2 comment lines on page 4 is kinda weird. Hope you add more; I think this can be rolled out further

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by Anonymous07/10/11

And Linda gets hers...?

Great story. Loved the whole situation. Next installment/chapter has Linda getting hers, D getting through Pledging to become the full member the girls want him to be. I hope!

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by bosombuddies11/20/11

Wish this happened to me!

Great humor, great sexual tension, and as always, a great build up and payoff for the reader.

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by Anonymous02/19/12

Good

A very good story with a good build up :) maybe even a sequel would be apropriate

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by droppanda02/12/13

great

nice stories, loved the backstory, a sequel would be nice

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by Anonymous01/19/14

a really good one.

bro you are really good at this. i wasnt interested reading sexual stories before i found yours but now im reading all except incest ones but this one must continue i think. its a really good one

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