All Comments on 'Revenge of the Nerd Ch. 08'

by rpsuch

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GenghisKhanGenghisKhanover 13 years ago
RP

I know this question won't surprise you, so let me ask it right away and as gently as I can: <p>

why are you purposefully RUINING your own story like this? the original posting was really good enough. cutting it into small, one-page pieces and posting the story this way is a pure waste of your time and few, if any reader, would say, "wow, author, it's incredible!" <p>

so, why are you doing this, again? <p>

if you have ADDITIONAL MATERIAL to the original story, which, as you can see for yourself, got an "H" (hot) designation... JUST POST THAT... why this nonsense? <p>

you notice that you posted 7-8 one-pagers so far and you've got, what?, 3 comments, total? sure, comments, or lack thereof, has no bearing on an author's posting activities.... but why waste your time like this for NO APPARENT sound or utilitarian reason whatsoever?

bruce22bruce22over 13 years ago
Slow but steady!

This is going like a session of love gently building up. So far I do not see why our beloved nerd would want reveng, but I am sure we will get there.

rpsuchrpsuchover 13 years agoAuthor
Gengis:

I submitted 11 chapters at the same time. I've submitted 4 more. The original was over 16000 words. The version I'm working on is 92000 words. I thought it would be confusing to have lots of chapters starting at 12 when there was no 1-11 and the original didn't have any chapter designation.

I expected 11 chapters to come out simultaneously so previous readers could start at Chapter 12 and new readers could start at 1. There are 15 chapters on my site and many more to come.

I put this information in my profile, but it isn't obvious that one should look there to get that kind of information.

I hope this addresses your concerns.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Confused

I was rather confused on the reasoning to repost the original story again. I was so ready to continue the original story from where it left off and I'm disappointed that its not a continuation.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I was following what he was doing until the part where he penetrated her. I have no fucking idea what all the rotating and moving in different directions is, legit can't even picture what that would look like lmao

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

lol so she doesn't know what her own g spot is huh? Oh and he rubs his cheeks on her breasts? Hmm I'm starting to think the author has never had sex or even talked to a woman.

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