All Comments on 'Sleeping Sister'

That wasn't incest it was NCR in my opinion

Like you wouldn't wake up if someone stuck a cock in your mouth!

...to see if she actually has a pulse. If she didn't wake up to all that she might be dead.

way too out of realiry to be even marginally creditable

As the reader b4 me said, "She had to be the DEEPEST sleeper I've EVER seen NOT to wake up when your dick BLOCKS the flow of air to her lungs OR maybe it just WASN'T that LARGE.

Maybe the guy was just dreaming the whole thing.

you have a nice fantasy there

Please note that this is a fantasy, that means it doesn't have to be 100% realistic. This is only my fourth story so I'm still learning, any suggestions would be nice. Thank you.

But at least make it believable. I was disappointed that you didn't have the sister start participating at some point. My favorite way of doing this story woul have been for the guy to basically lose his control a bit, and go to far, but then he realizes that with what he has been doing there is no way she is asleep still, so he figures why not push it. In the end, he would push himself in her and at that point she stops acting like she is asleep. Or she stops when he goes down on her and she starts actively participating.

if you are going to write a fantasy put in the fantasy area otherwise it better be realistic and believable that is why they have seperate areas USE THEM PROPERLY

And that is how you play with your tight sister with stealth and satisfaction, but really amazing story would love more

what a wonderful chance! you should have fuck her as I did.

There is basically no story here. More detail. All together good, but could be longer.

Good story, but!

You came on her feet, then tit.

You should have cum in her pussy, then mouth.