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C_frommnC_frommnover 13 years ago
Pritti

nice follow-up but you would think they would have Progressed

from here to something more for both of them.

also does Pritti have other Males she see's.

Comentarista82Comentarista82over 8 years ago
Love the idea...

...although it is true the sex is a bit rushed and sorry...it's unlikely he could "get it up" again in so short a time, as that's unrealistic. For him to spurt on her bust isn't smart, since it's impractical with the clean up at work. Otherwise, hot idea pretty well executed except for those things. 4.

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