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Chiara and Annie Ch. 01

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by slowtenderman11/08/10

convincing and erotic

It rings true. Saw your reference to this in the chat room, but didn't get a chance to speak to you. Would be good, I'd like to know if my own efforts to convey the girl-on-girl experience work for you.

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by Anonymous06/17/11

Hi Chiara

Golly Girl, What a wonderful erotic story your first chapter lays out. I am so glad I found you today in the chat room. I was going to start with the one you felt was your best but this one I think will be hard to top. You have a wonderful way with words but I am more into the stories than the grammer. Hopefully will get to the rest in my private time and hope we run across each other again on lit... many thanks for responding dawn 47 ( bringing back memories of my youth. )

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by Anonymous08/01/11

Exciting!! and HOT! Great story.

Thank you for an exciting story. I loved it.

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by Arcadian176812/29/11

Nice

Oh god, I hope this is a true story. Can't wait to read Ch. 02....

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by J_J_Livingstone02/02/12

Awesome

Great story....loved it!

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