by psyche_b_mused
startin the series late seeing if i like what i see.
I loved how the story is started, you didn't try to change much of his character this far. He isn't fawning over her like a love sick puppy as soon as he sees her cover in bruises, and her " beauty" isn't already making his heart melt. I swear so many stories have a plot where the love is so instant that there is no thrill for the reader. It's all batta bong batta bang! I hope the story is as exciting as it is portrayed in the first chapter.
In the comic or the 'toons he's a real sweet guy. NOT !!!! In this, he's no different so far. And it's interesting. So I'm just going to have to keep reading till it ends or gets boring. Whichever comes first. But I'm expecting it to only get better.
This is a great story to follow, it kept me captivated all the way through.
This is my fourth time through this tale. You honestly acknowledge that it might be too dark for some. For me, it is deliciously dark. You invest time in developing your characters and giving your readers something to cheer about. Best long story on the site. Best fan fiction I’ve ever read.