by storyteller1023
Taking a decent story line and severely damaging it by going anal sex it stupid. Why play in the sewer when there's such a wonderful playground so close.
Anal sex isn't for everyone. Well, unless you're a character in one of my stories apparently, then you seem to be quite fond of backdoor activities. At any rate, sorry that "tainted" it for you, but I'm glad that you liked the rest of it...it was a lot of fun to write!
This was the 1st erotic story I've read, and I'm quite impressed! There were 2 parts where the characters names were switched, but a very good read either way!
This story is great!
Sorry, for me the anal part took this from amazing erotica to medium quality porn.
Perhaps you could do another story on these friends on a party barge during a lake cruise?