All Comments on 'Wife Stripped While Husband Watches'

Thought the play on words with their names was cute(good golly molly)! A bit of humor always makes a story more interesting for me lol.

Loved the story. Got me hard and came hard too. Make sure you write more.

an awesome story so very erotic and very hot and horny. another really exciting story love the writing your going to be one of the best on here.

i really do think. your stories are majical they come to life.

Your situation is erotic, but the presentation comes off as confused. For instance, ' she pulled down his bathing suit to expose my cock.' is inconsistent. And through the 1st page, we don't know what's going on.

But, practice makes perfect! Keep at it.

A little too much of the build-up. And not enough of the climax. It was still good, though. I would just cut the first page by half. Maybe another story with HIS fantasy played out with a gangbang?

When you went to the free clinic at the end of summer did you have any STD's, or aids or herpes or any other fun thing? Seems a steep price to pay for being sluts.

It was just a Story...LOL Stories do not get STD's...I hope

I loved the story! Sexy fantasy and a somewhat believable scenario. Definitely room for a second chapter to this story. The build-up was a little longer than it could have been and more of them discussing different fantasies or living out a few. I'll read your chapter 2 for sure!!

Some like it kinky. This is OK as a fantasy.

A continuation with further exploits would be welcomed!

Why just two guys? Why not more friends and couples. Lets say 8 people. She eats the pussies of some of the woman. Average; no more than 3 stars. No wonder their are so few current comments.

Liked it. Good fantasy. But after 10 years no second chapter is coming, none really needed. Jack and Bob had to know it was a set up, fulfilling one or both of their (Rodger & Molly) fantasies.