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Indian Wife & Construction Guys Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by katib08/29/10

Nice construction...

Your story begins well, and I'm eager to see how it progresses. One grammatical point. Consider your sentence: "Purva, like I said, was incredibly attractive." Like is a preposition, not a conjunction: us "as I said...."

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by mstrb7708/29/10

It will happen

It sounds like something that happened to my wife except it was our house being built and she kept checking on the 4 that working on it to see if there is anything she can help with.
It didn't take them long to get her naked and take turns with her. This happened every day until they finished the house. Three white men and one black.

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by digdaddyrich08/29/10

Maybe a gang bang is in the future

It could be 4 or 5 of the workers may take her and give her a good long fucking.
Of course she will be embarrassed about it and never tell her husband.

Good start and I hope to see more soon

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by Anonymous08/30/10

Great Story

I think Quin will be pleased

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by Anonymous08/30/10

Another masterpiece

Another masterpiece from the master. Please keep writing more. You have real talent!

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by Anonymous09/11/10

U assholes talking great about Indian values, give u guys half chance u will fuck ur sister or mother so don't talk cock just read the stories and enjoy it.

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by atul_ats11/09/10

Do you think it is possible in India?

I truly appreciate your writing skills, the narrative and the build up, but I believe this story is little far from reality ... Have never heard or seen construction workers taking so much liberty in India ... The idea, the theme is great but I wish you had attempted it little differently ... Your shy Indian wife series continues to be the best and my favourite ... keep it up ... By the way, I am writing these comments only after reading first part .. let me go back and read the remaining ...

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by 2inchblunder06/10/11

I think its simply great

I think its a great situation and even greater handling of the story.. Liked the way it builds up and climaxed at the end...

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by Anonymous04/24/13

Erotic story.....more of such kind....needed

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