by SubBabs
You've got to be fucking kidding and no way would any physician recommend skipping meals. The body goes into starvation mode and actually stores fat. Add into the fact that teachers sign a morality clause that prevents them from fucking around and your story goes from "hot" to "not".
Please note... this story is FICTION! It is not true and writers have the right to create false situations as part of the FICTION. If I wanted it totally accurate, I would have written and autobiographical work and been accurate.
I am very intrigued but please remember this is an erotic tale. If there is a "killing" I feel as though it will ruin my "high".
i eagerly waiting for the revenge of husband . enough is enough make him hero or some strong person
I really like the series thus far, and the comments it is getting "too out there" fly in the face of it being fiction. The enforced lactation, the control of Kevin and the doctor is a great story line and I look forward to the next installment. In fact, my only comment is the long time (nearly 30 days) between the last chapter and (hopefully) the next.
Hope to see the husband get even with them. can't wait for the next chapter, thanks for writing this.
But please don't bring a killing into it. I feel it goes against the whole tenor of the story. There has to be a different ending to bring things to a satisfactory conclusion. Put that gun away!
I agree with those who would rather not have a killing...besides, if hubby was going to get enraged he is way overdue. It just seems out of character for this guy to suddenly grow a set of balls. I know its just fiction and you needed some excuse for wifey to find her true sub side and throwing in the 'nearly blackmail' aspect served to set up a conflict of emotions which usually makes a story better. However, the storyline thus far does not seem to support resorting to extreme violence but unfortunately you introduced the concept and I'm afraid you will just have to go with it. Forget about trying to satisfy everyone. You are now surrounded by two camps...The "Kill the cheating bitch crowd" and the "Why can't we all just get along bunch". Pick a side and just a word of advice...next time make the choice before you start writing. It could have been a good story either way...now its just confusing.
Its developing into a really good story. I hope we continue to see her humiliation as she slowly gives in to her passion. I think she likes seeing her husband pushed down a peg. Hopefully he will come to terms with her change and accept it, rather than taking foolish action. I especially like the twist of her being forced to milk herself - brilliant. Keep it coming!
I'm a little disappointed she gets drugged before altercations occur to her body it would be far better for her to submit and have to endure them while awake. I love the idea of piercing used for a chastity device I fist hear it in a story by lofwyrkp called A piercing it is one of my faves. Also a lactation sex slave sounds like absolute heaven but I do not believe they would get nearly as large as you imagine my wife's did not. I hope her husband kills Kevin and takes over dominating his wife and Kevins. Thank you for your hard work keep it up!
How come so many morons are being so
insipid as to suggest how the author should
write her story? Leave the author alone, it is
her story, you write a tale the way you desire
it to be portrayed, oh that's right you have
never written one for this site. Thanks author
once again for entertaining us deviates!