by m_storyman_x
It was nice to go back over the previous stories again. Hope that you will continue...
That was a nice addition to the story hopefully we won't have to wait a year to find out what happens on the honeymoon in chapter 7. :)
Please keep writing more "Storm Damage" chapters, I can't wait till the next one.
The sex is great, but it is more than just wham, bam thank you maam. It tells a story, and a pretty good one at that. (At least I think so)
I can't wait for the rest of the story. Please don't keep us waiting!
This can't be the end - at least tell us about the honeymoon??? Pleas!!!
Need to hear about the honeymoon and what else the sisters have instore for him. Great series
These are the types of stories I love here. Good sex, but the plot is the most important part.
I'd love to read some more, too.
Hi, as I wrote before I like your stories pretty much!
This one has a very nice and multilayered storyline!
Would love to read some more from the newlywed couple.
Stunningly well done series. Each one allowing the reader to quickly grasp the new story lines, as well as enjoy the new developments!!!
but TONS of typos and grammatical errors. A Sandy where a Tina should be, words correctly spelled but incorrect for the context. Not sure why this would rate so high when it's a solid 3 at best.
Another great series with excellent characters, but I think you definitely cut it short. This has the potential to see many more chapters to follow. Great work anyway!
I am - but others as well - waiting for the missing surprise honeymoon.
This story is a few years old, but is still a real delight, and deserving of at least one more honeymoon episode. For that matter Life With The Twins, a newer story, also seems to call for another episode. Interestingly, both groups of people are going to be at a Caribbean resort, enjoying themselves and the people they meet.
I wonder if they might just end up at the same resort at the same time, with maybe these storm-tossed lovers arriving a couple of days after the Twins? There is easily room here for three stories, with the two groups having adventures of their own before meeting for some interesting times...
Certainly one of you best works! I've spent the last few days reading your whole library. I just love your style and how you build your characters.
I'm anxiously awaiting the arrival of the next chapter.
This marvelous adventure story continues in chapter 6 as a touching romance, but the story definitely needs at least one more chapter to tie things up with the newlyweds and their new life together.
Really thought this was going to end up him “married” to the other sisters also.
Next chapter.
Nice ending but left enough outstanding for another instalment covering the honeymoon.
"What's tomorrow?" I asked her.
"Just our surprise honeymoon!" She answered with a grin
"Just the two of us?"
"That you will have to wait to find out."
I told you some years ago that another chapter was needed!!
WHERE IS IT??
My favorite story on your site. I agree that I wish there was one more chapter.
I would have wished for a bit more of the daughter mentioned in the wedding proceedings, and I was looking forward to words spoken, or an understanding with, the 3 ladies’ dad.
""Should we go to sleep? You may need it for tomorrow."
"What's tomorrow?" I asked her
"Just our surprise honeymoon!" She answered with a grin.
"Just the two of us?"
"That you will have to wait to find out."
So, WHERE IS TOMORROW???
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