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Cutie18Cutie18over 13 years ago
Great

That was great hope more

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
A Super Start

more please, TOTALLY hot :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great start, but...

...it hits too close to home!

A friend of mine fucked the mom of a friend and GOT caught!It was ugly...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very realistic

Very good story. It is real and situations occur like this quite often. starts as innocent teasing and progresses. keep up the fine writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I was really, really hoping for

at least 4-5 more chapters

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I have had many comments over the years about how my characters or story endings are flawed, but that's on purpose. After twenty years with a large police department, I've learned that people are flawed and are constantly acting in ways that defy logic. It is that illogical me...