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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very good

Better than expected . You kept the story very realistic and it reminded me of past encounters with my own cousin .

SchnepfeSchnepfeover 12 years ago
liked it!

well written. Thank you! It's good to know, there are a few more chapters!

shadowolf1shadowolf1over 2 years ago

awesome start...seems like his cousin's husband does not mind her playing with family

OseekerOseeker7 months ago

Good start & sounds like she won't be waiting for her boyfriend to be 1st.

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