I love this series but I agree with the crowd I would rather see fewer chapters but each one be longer. Either way I want to see the series continue for quite some time
I think this was the funniest chapter so far. I read the very first version, and I agree with others that fewer chapters that are a little longer would be nice. But I still love this story.
English
Thank you
I love this rewrite. I hope this isn't the end
Too Short
Fun, but the chapters are just so short......anyway, short or not, I really enjoy both the anticipation and the realization of that anticipation!
Way too short.
I enjoyed your original much better. I'll wait until you have several more chapters before returning.
Short
I love this series but I agree with the crowd I would rather see fewer chapters but each one be longer. Either way I want to see the series continue for quite some time
Long or Short....
It doesn't matter. Do it like you want to. I'm happily with you one way or another.
Delightful Fun
I guess I am a wimp, that is I read the story to enjoy and not to criticize its content...
I second Bruce22
Just relax and enjoy the story. While I too am disappointed in their brevity I anxiously await future chapters.
Love it
The chapters may be short but the content within them is great. I like how the story is unfolding and can't wait to read more.
Great story
I think this was the funniest chapter so far. I read the very first version, and I agree with others that fewer chapters that are a little longer would be nice. But I still love this story.
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