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Simply beautiful
Well written, sensual, erotic and quite beautiful. What a fine fantasy to take my mind off of the ending of the summer.
Oh dear me - yes
Short, sharp and beautiful.
Thank you.
hp
Nicely Done
Everything in the right measure and the imagry brought it to life.
Great erotic story
Let me be blunt. This is great jack off material.
Two first timers!
Rare for two strangers to share such a fantasy for the first time. Usually it's an experienced person showing another the ropes.
You're missing a paragraph [or something] of exposition telling us the history of the stranger with the narrator. Other than that, it flows beautifully.
Tee hee! "Flow." Wetness. Hee!
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