by ABloodyRareJewel
I like Aira but I'm undecided about Rowan. We've just seen the animalistic side and I would like to see some of the humanity in him. I'm a bit confused about all the different kinds of vampires. You do explain them in the glossary but there are so many kinds, it's hard to keep them straight, especially this early in the story. I was also quite confused with the flashback in the last chapter. Some kind of indication that the scene/time is changing would be beneficial. Still, a good start. I'm curious to see what will happen next.