All Comments on 'Chemical Messenger'

I really liked this story; the prose was wonderfully descriptive. But I felt the amount of time spent on the carnal act itself versus the time spent on atmosphere was very biased. I expected the act of sex to be as well described as the house. Very nice story overall. But I'm waiting for a sophomore product, if just to appreciate the poetry.

I no this is goin to sound dumb, but wat does it means wen the author writes “the driver hands me a Casio watch. It’s still beeping” it that from the dealer or her boss. I’m just confused.

This is such an amazing story! I loved the characters and their personalities, and also that is my dream man. Holy moly.