All Comments on 'Mine Forever More'

Though brief, the story was still engaging and arousing, with tension from the inevitable onslaught of invaders. But further proofing or some editor help would avoid errors such as third paragraph, "You must decided (sic) and fast."

Please keep writing!

A enjoyable read, though it feels like the erotic tension could well be extended under the threat of approaching invaders (vamps and zombies). The story was mostly well done, but more proofing or an editor could help avoid errors such as in the third paragraph, "You must decided (sic) and fast."

Please keep writing!

I loved this story!!! Is there more to it?