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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/22/10

But did she truely

love her husband by denying him what her lover wanted for himself.


SC

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by zed009/22/10

Almost A Happy Ending!

It is not a crime to love two persons. It’s not even a crime to fuck two persons. It is a crime to lie to your husband, about fucking two persons, and have sex outside of your committed relationship. Maybe not in the eyes of the law, but it is still a crime none the less. Obviously she married a wimp who allowed her adulterous behavior to continue, so it is fortunate that he never got the chance to procreate. Had he confronted the situation when he discovered it, his son would not have had to resort to such extreme behaviors. But that would not have been as much fun to read. I think Junior suffered from a little too much testosterone, much like his dominating sperm donor father, and I find it rather heart warming that he killed the S O B. It is too bad that he felt the need to suicide, unless he was careless and thought the cops would bust him for murder. It would have made an interesting trial story when Junior made public the correspondence from sperm donor to his slut mom. It certainly would have caused the slut mom some much deserved public humiliation and grief. It appears this pathetic, miserable excuse for a human being spent her last years in her own special hell in the asylum, and I assume that the devil has reserved a special place for her to rot in also.

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by Anonymous09/22/10

She

deserved WORSE than she got , she didnt seem to pay at all really , she just got a free ride , and doesnt even see or admit she did anything wrong . A sociopath . People get off way too easy . Perhaps thats why Islam is growing so fast , scary .

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by mcwiii09/22/10

Good yarn

She killed all three of the men in her life and got exactly what she deserved. Sometimes things just have a way of working out.

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by Anonymous09/22/10

Yes she deserved EVERYTHING she got.

I hope the son never spoke to her ever again. What she did is beyond the pale, as the saying goes. She lied and cheated on her husband let her husband unknowingly bring up someone elses bastard. This unforgivable. I hope a large deep black hole is waiting to welcome her.

As for the crime of loving two men? No that isn't a crime in the eyes of the law. But it should have been in her eyes and any vows she had made. Also it isn't a crime to cuckold someone for 20 odd years. But it SHOULD be.

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by Anonymous09/22/10

So LW is hijacked by the Muslims again

Guys, take your Sharia loving asses back to whereever the fuck you came from, this is America and we don't appreciate your shit here.

Lets face it, people make mistakes and how they deal with the unexpected is a true measure of a man. A real man doesn't murder someone then take his own life. He owns up to his actions. A real man doesn't cower behind false bravado and talk about punishing a woman for falling in love with the wrong guy and finally, a real man isn't going to let someone suffer because it makes HIM feel better.

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by jasonnh09/22/10

She was mentally ill but depression wasn't her problem

She has no concept of what faithfulness means. She keeps claiming that she was faithful? To what? Certainly not to her wedding vows. Certainly not to the respect that she should have had for her husband. For about twenty (?) years she has maintained a love relationship with a man outside her marriage. She has a son from her lover who she foists off on her husband as his. She is going to proudly introduce her lover to her son as his father when he turns 21, not even considering the impact this could have on her husband. She plans secret hookups at medical conferences. This is NOT a mistake. This is a deliberate and long running choice of lifestyle. She is unrepentant and actually sees no reason for feeling guilt. She thinks of herself as lucky that she has her lover and her family. She is proud her lover is her son's father. She points out that some men have multiple women and decries a double standard but fails to recognize that extremely few places accept the validity of more than 2 people in a marriage. Besides this not being a "mistake" she never admits her actions and asks for forgiveness. In reading her attitude in her letters you would have to wonder if she would have eventually left her husband now that her son was an adult. To answer her questions: "Is it a crime to love two persons?" It is a moral crime to break your marriage commitment to your husband. If you can't honor it, get a divorce and love as many as you want to. Or talk to your husband and see if you can live an open marriage. People are capable of loving many people. Marriage makes a commitment to limit your fidelity to one. If that's not your thing, don't get married. "Did I not faithfully serve my family?" NO, you were faithless. "Do I deserve the punishment I got?" Justice can sometimes be harsh. Did your husband deserve a slut wife?

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by roadbird09/22/10

yes she did

deserve what she got n she should have gotten more

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by Anonymous09/22/10

Learn to Spell

There is no such word as "learnt."

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by Anonymous09/22/10

Learn to use a dictionary.

Actually, "learnt" is a word, hero.

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by Ahabscribe09/22/10

Keep Going!

Ashascribe,

Enjoyed your story - tragic and sad though it be. Granted, structurally it could use some work, but your message comes through. Keep writing - practice makes perfect. I look forward to the next!

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by peteinchicago09/22/10

what a bitch

I think she got off easy, hell, by her actions she killed everyone in her life! She served no one but herself, how can she believe she was a good wife? Her entire life was A lie. To bad nothing worse happened to her.

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by Anonymous09/22/10

Why didn't the wife kill her self sooner?

When her lover died. That's when she should have killed herself.

Does this writer have a twin brother? I assume this writer is a female or so the profile states.

But who is Ashascribe? or is it the same person?

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by ohio09/22/10

I believe we're meant to understand

that the wife is deluding herself. In other words, the author clearly knows that the wife was not justified in her selfish, dishonest behavior, even though the wife seems to think she behaved reasonably.

A good first story--though not perfect--and I hope this author will write some more!

Thanks, ohio

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by digdaddyrich09/22/10

Certainly no happy ending here

Quite the tale of adultery, deception, cheating and lying, death and along with suicide.
A ghastly tale ending in pain, and no mater how much love was felt prior to the destruction of her life, wouldn't be worth the grief she caused.

Good story, well written and well planned out. Thanks

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by vietvet09/22/10

She destroyed her life when:

she broke her marriage vows early in her marriage and then had another mans child while denying her husband.
Its called "KARMA", and it always catches up with you.

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by Vulcan_in_Ohio09/22/10

Enjoyed this.

Despite the obvious language-related errors, this was quite good and I believe, fairly original. Oh, I know there have been other stories where love letters between an unfaithful wife and her lover are discovered and cause an unraveling of their secret(s). But the way this was done, along with certain touches, makes it unique in my opinion. Thanks for writing.

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by Anonymous09/22/10

A level of hell should be dedicated to people like her

To a person who take a vow to their spouse and so completely breaks it , a special level of he'll should exist. Are we to feel her self assignment to the asylum is sufficient pennance for destroying her bastard son and her husband?

I would say it isn't sufficient. She wantonly did what she did and her only remorse is because she got caught and lost her fuck buddy and bastard son.

At the start she should have diviorced her husband and freed him to find a love that would honor her vows, not steal from her husband like this bitch did.

So I wonder why the author should want to spend time contemplating such a story. If this in anyway describes a situation you find yourself in, please do the right thing and do not steal the trust that someone else has given.

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by Pistolpackinpete09/22/10

Good story about delusional self justification....

.....especially for someone from INDIA. (Probably not Muslim.) I found it amusing that anonymous thinks that there is a proper way for a man to act in this situation. Personally anon, if I were the son I might of had mom raped anally and forced to choke down a cricket teams worth of splooge. (In sight of and before killing the scum who bore me.) If I could have found my Sperm donor, who died 4 years before I found my bio-mom I'd have at least threatened to kill his worthless ass, at least in the name of the (at least) 11 other children he abandoned. Committing suicide is not necessarily a cowardly act, in certain circumstances it is downright honorable. Like this one. One last thing, it's AHABscribe reader!

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by GenghisKhan09/22/10

The difference

between "loving two men" in THIS society --- being "faithful to both" (letting one fuck your ass and not the other, etc. --- and some societies allowing a man to have two wives concurrently is that in the LATTER situation, the two wives live, if not happily amicably or in some functional way, in the SAME HOUSEHOLD, raising babies together!

actually, in some very hard, isolated societies in or around the Himalaya mountain range... where the land is very rugged, poor, and making a living is very hard, it was very mainstream for two men, usually two brothers, to married to one woman. And in such poor, rugged landscape, it made sense, since two men devoting their time and energy to providing for the children of just one woman --- whose child could be either man's so both would have interest to making sure he or she grows up --- increased the chances of that child, or two children, surviving.

the very small, exquisitely beautifully colored tamarin monkeys of the Amazon Rainforest do the same thing: a female would almost always have two males, and she almost always gives birth to twins, too (so both males have reasons to believe the twins are theirs, equally). being very small, they feed mostly on nectar; and there's a lot of competition, form birds, insects, and other small monkeys.... whenever the mother is tired, or wants to feed, she would signal, with her tongue, and the two males would come rushing to her, each taking a baby (even though a lot of times, the twins would hang on very tightly to their mother, naturally, not wanting to let mum go, even if just to feed alone for a few minutes, so she could produce milk for them).

these are NATURAL social systems, arranged to make BIOLOGY works to carry on the parents genetics; the odd numbering arrangement is merely to INCREASE the chances of 3 adults raising their offspring to adulthood in environments where the margin of safety is very small, due to food scarcity...

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by chytown09/22/10

Good Reading!!!!!!

It is very refreshing to see new story lines. Please keep doing you style of writing you have a new fan. "Thank You"

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by Anonymous09/22/10

Selfish slut ruins 4 lives.

And she can't think what she did wrong? I didn't know they had democrats in India

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by Chagrined09/23/10

Is it a crime?

No. Certainly not. But, it is highly inadvisable to act upon that love. as this woman soon found out. As to whether or not she got what she deserved, only God knows but (if she was married as a Christian) after breaking her vows I don't think He is going to be very pleased with her.

Good story and a bit different.
Regards
C

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by Anonymous09/23/10

That whore deserved much worse than to just live the rest of her days in a mental hospital. The husband and son deserved better. The son proved to be far better than either his mother or sperm donor despite the lousy source of his DNA.

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by Rehnquist09/23/10

Somewhat Original and Thought Provoking

I'll leave aside for now the moral judgment of whether the wife was right or wrong. Instead, I'd like to applaud the author on a generally well-written, very original, and--much more importantly--thought provoking story.

The writing? I think it could have been a little tighter. Also, I would not have relied on the last letter to explain the affair. Rather, I think the story would have been more interesting had tidbits about the genesis and flourishing of the affair been sprinkled throughout the various letters. Also, the point was almost immediately made that she allowed her lover anal and oral, yet denied them to her husband. There was no need to beat the point to death in subsequent letters. Finally, the son's letter seemed to make a nonsensical jump: I'm going to kill your lover then myself. Why did he kill himself? Why not just kill the lover and take your chances of getting away with it? And why not just hint at his plans in the letter to his mother so she could always wonder? While the plot device is the writer's to choose, I think it could have been better used.

Second, highly original. There was recently a story in the Romance section--sorry, I forget the story's name--where the wife also had two loves, though the other one had died twenty years before. In that story, wife really paid no price and never realized the harm of her affair. Similar to this, except here there were consequences. Thus, this is, in far fewer words, a taut version of the "is having two loves really possible" scenario with a conclusion that smacks of NO, IT'S NOT POSSIBLE! Commenters should thus criticize the wife in this, but not the author for reaching this conclusion.

Third, thought provoking. Why? Look at all of the comments, most against and a few for the wife's actions. By leaving this open ended, though, we are left to ponder the matter. This is not neatly wrapped and presented for us to digest. Instead, it's neatly presented and left for us to ponder. Me? I think the whole mess is just plain sad. An innocent husband and son are dead because she still doesn't understand the terrible impact of her own selfish choices. Can she love two men? I suppose so. Still, comparing two physical lovers to the love a parent has for children presents a false dichotomy. And how evil was her continuing attempt to foist off her lover's child as her husband's child? The lover knew the truth, but the husband didn't. These questions--and many more--present themselves and call for thought.

Any story that can do this, in my opinion, deserves kudos.

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by incestor00709/23/10

No this certainly is not crime

Wrong or right, can be decided, we can judge people ethically, but here it is not the case, she certainly did not commit crime, not loving someone is not crime, certainly loving someone is also not crime, which is what she did, she loved her lover and never loved her husband. She did not commit any crime. Ethically she did nothing wrong. And that is all she did, Ethically no wrong. Morally depends on person to person. For a husband she did the worst thing any wife could do to her husband. Not only she did that she tried to justfy that too, which is worse. So except her husband no one should blame her. He is the one to decide weather she commited crime or not loving tow person. And about her son, it was his own choice, to end his own life, not able to accept an adulterous as mother. A prostitute is better mother than a adultrous, because she can justify her action. But adultrous can only rationalise, as i said it was his own choice to end his own life. But giving birth to a bastard was his mother's fault. she could not be blamed for his death, but making him believe that a very high moral person was his father, and let him inherit his values, which led him to not to accept her as mother.

parent love thier kids equally. But my parents nevr said to me , "We never gave this to your brother, we are giving this to you" so i dont think we need to say anything about that.

About promises, did not she promised to love his husband only. so much for promises. no need to say anything more about promises.

In the end not judging her morally or ethically I can only thik of her as a selfish person, for her she was the one who actually mattered in first place. Because if you really loved someone you ought to set him free to find someone who can really love him, which by no mean this lady was.

If a mother comes between son and his wife, because she think her son only belong to her, she is regareded as selfish. Keeping everything for her, no matter, what her son wants.

here wife wanted to be with both of them, it did never mattered to her what they wanted, her husband wanted a faithful wife, her lover wanted a slut, her son wanted a respectful mother, she chose to go with what she wanted.

She deserved it or not does no matter, because she was hardly a person mattered to anyone anymore, but her husband and son did not deserve anything happend to them.

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by Anonymous09/23/10

RE:Incestor007

Ethics and morals are by definition the same thing. The difference between right and wrong.Where you stand on that scale defines you as a person. It is people who do not know what they are talking about that fuck up the world for the rest of us.

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by Pistolpackinpete09/23/10

Re incestor....

....you say only the father has a right to blame her???? WTF!- as an abandoned and later adopted child, I'd like to inform you that there is nothing more important to a young child (one who hasn't yet developed conscientious social attachments) than knowing who and where you're from. And that importance will only explode if it is discovered one was lied to. Minimizing the collateral damage she caused is fucking ignorant.

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by Anonymous09/23/10

Yes, the cheating whore deserved her loneliness & despair!

Hopefully slut Debbie from the other drama {DQS's} will end up the same as this wretched slut [lonely, suffering and internal despair abound]. That would be poetic justice for that whore as well as the much deserved fate of this one.

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by bruce2209/23/10

A Sad Tale

There are people out there capable of occupying all these roles in real life. Selfishness really destroys relationships..

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by Anonymous09/24/10

The cheating whore got what she deservedzm she destroyed her and and her husband, and who gives a shit about her lover. I have nothing but contempt for her.

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by Mandy0109/26/10

Good moral dilemma?

Can you love two people equally? I actually think you can, I think the human soul has enough love to give to many, but by the same token she’s asking the wrong question.

Is it a crime to love two persons? No

Did I not faithfully serve my family? No, by definition she was unfaithful.

Do I deserve the punishment I got? She definitely may have, but did her husband and son? I think not, she set up this relationship to feather her own nest, nothing more.


Loving two people doesn’t break a marriage, lies and deceit break marriages. The woman is right when she sites that there are not as many polyandrous relationships as there are Polygamous ones. But they do seem to work, although I’d say that they need more maintenance and attention to fair play then a normal monogamous relationship. What killed everyone in this woman’s world was the deceit and disrespect that she showed her first husband and son. Not a bad read to make you think... Good work!

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by teh56802/11/11

Interesting Story

And yes, she did deserve the punishment she got. Unfortunately, her husband, her son, and the wife of the lover were the only truely trustworthy characters. They alonedid not desrve what they got.

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by Huedogg201/24/12

Mandy01 made some good point

as well as some of the commentor, the thing is if they where in a poly style relationship, they all agree to sharing. She was just a selfish slut that fuck up 3 peoples lives, her son, her husband and the lover's wife. The lover was just another a moral asshole that fucked up another mans marriage. I also find fault in her husband, that keeping the family together at all cost is a false hope dream. In the end you do more damage then good. If the truth would have come out and had been dealt with by her and the husband. The chain of events could have been broken, the son wouldn't need to kill is bio dad, the husband wouldn't have given up the will to live after is heart attack and the bio dad wouldn't have killed his wife. They probley would have been divorced after the truth came out.

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by betrayedbylove07/19/12

Well Written

The cheating wife was mentally unstable way before she thought she was. She deprived her husband of rights he earned as a faithful and loving husband. Her insanity came through onto her son which caused him to do what he did. Then with the death of her cheating asshole lovers wife both went off the deep end.

Interesting point.
Can you love two people? Yes of course. Remember we're only human. But when you take the sacred vow of marriage you pledge yourself wholly to your spouse. You refrain from showing love to another or leave your spouse for the other. She deceived her husband and her child.Thankfully the last ten years of her life were spent in pain. It doesn't have to be physical pain but it hurt nonetheless.

To those of you who would say its only sex, go fuck yourself.
To those of you who condone and brag about cheating, DIE IN PAIN

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by sugna02/25/13

Cop out

She wasn't crazy. She just made selfish and bad decisions. She didn't "love" anyone, not even herself. She did what ever her ego and libido wanted at the moment. Her whole life was nothing but an ego trip. Had she loved her husband, she would never have fucked another man, and worse had another man's child. That is selfishness, not love. Love is doing the RIGHT thing by those you care for. This story sickens me as it does not answer this, and perpetuates the selfishness. She had to pay for her selfishness along with everyone else who did not deserve to pay for it. Bitch! Be careful who you marry. Always condemn a cheater and shun them. Nothing good will come from associating with them.

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by betrayedbylove02/25/13

Wow

Read it again. A word of advice. Don't cheat. Consequences are a bitch.

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by cantbuymy02/25/13

Great story - unique.

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by firas0102/25/13

is it love?

love is a high and pure value and emotion that should never be confused or related to how this woman felt, love somebody should never mean that somebody else can be hurt by it, loving somebody should never mean deceit or treachery or consequences that we are ashamed of, history is full of people who loved the wrong person but kept their love to themselves because it was wrong to declare it or act on it, this woman was not doomed of loving two people and she was innocent because there was nothing she can do about it, no, this woman simply wanted to keep her cake and eat it, she wanted to satisfy all her needs regardless of how the others are impacted by her actions, and this is the result, a complete mess, thanks for sharing.

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by phil221311/27/13

So what? Her out of sync with societal norms did her in.

This is a fetish story feeding to the cucks that get off on humiliation. There is no emotion or drama just a boring narration. However, the content killed any hope of acceptance of any realm of a real story. Perhaps, this author should explore other venues of subject matter to to more warmly received by a broader larger audience. Thank you.

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by Duna11/27/13

5*****

Very good Consequence Story. I prefer Revenge stories to Consequence, because the most Good Revenge Stories are not depressed sad stories.
BTW The cheaters are time thifs. They steal time from the other spouses, because the betrayed spouse could divorce earlier they would have more time for looking for newer other mates..............and if they have not child support burden for bastards they could start a new family...........

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by x_witless_x11/27/13

Duna baby..

most good is 'best'. More good is 'better'.

Use 'more' and 'most' with longer adjectives.

Not one of the most important comments I've ever made. Thanks for writing.

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by lonewolf330711/30/13

To answer your character's question about punishment...

... I think she got nothing anywhere close to what she deserved.

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