All british writers Gay ???????? they all seem to write about somebody screwing their wife and eating her afterward ( exception being average writer who at least thinks like a man ). This site does need a swinger/swap category . Readers have been asking for this for a very long time . It's very needed to help keep crap like this out of LW . But I must realize this is a porn story site run by volunteers , as nobody could do such a bad job and not get fired by their boss if they were getting paid . You write well but im sorry , wrong category for willing cuck stories . Find another plot scenario if its going in LW .
....and it belongs where it is. If the wife ends up changing over time in a bad way then hubby got what he asked for. I hate most cuck stories and don't get off on watching others fuck live, let alone MY others, but if there is no humiliation, than simply calling it a "cuck" story and "writing it off" as such serves no purpose. Then all you've done Mongo is make it that much harder to delineate which stories really DON'T belong in loving wives. If I tell my bitch to fuck someone for my enjoyment how does that make me less a man? If you tell your woman to fuck someone you'll probably get a fork in your nose so who's the Mack Daddy chizump? (I'm being metaphorical so don't get too fired up!) I thought some of the musings she expressed re: potential fuckers was fairly unique for this perverted genre. I'm sure it will eventually veer left into humiliation jungle but for now you write well and I can only express my condolences for your unfortunate choice of fetishes!!!....
You're not much of a writer. Writers keep their characters' names the same. Was it John or Joe? Writers have a working knowledge of the English language. You need a lot of help. And the sex scene was pretty boring. This site is not only run by volunteers, but most of the writers clearly don't care about writing. It's sad.
I find it interesting to note that the harshest critics are those that have never written much, most often nothing at all.
There are some valid comments, and I do wish I could go back and correct a few daft errors.
if the so called critical experts are so great and our offerings so very bad, why are they spending time writing comments when they could be writing fabulous work them selves or producing superior websites?
I think we all know the answer to that.
I thought you did a good job. One error with the same character named two different names, but otherwise, pretty good. Looking forward to the next time....maybe her husband could fuck her afterwards when her cunt is full of another man's cum.
The husband Steve made himself a willing cuckold. His wife never cheated before. Now she has permission to fuck anybody as long as her husband can watch.. How sick is that.
ALL WILLING CUCKS SHOULD DIE
...is because of professional courtesy and the fear of getting lambasted themselves. That's why anon has a place here, you will often get the most insightful or at the very least the most honest response.,
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