All Comments on 'Being Christina's Bitch'

I hope (in a later story) you have the bitch gang raped bareback, just to teach him who's boss. - Loved the story.

Like it!

Ditto to Pepperpuppy's comment. Love to see the bitch gang fucked and forced to suck all of those filthy cocks clean.

Many men need the treatment Christina gave. A lot of women can learn how to properly train men from this story. Keep writing you are on the right track. It will help you

I could use more constructive feedback on my first story. What did you like, what didn't you like, and what would you like to see next? I want to make sure there's some interest before I invest the time in writing a second part. Feel free to comment here or send me feedback. Thanks!

Please finish the story. Were they male or female or both. Please add a few more chapters.

loved the first installment and am still waiting for the next-it has been almost a year now. The way that you got him to the room is wonderful and the opening of his ass by tongue and dildo is great as well-my lady uses a 10" dildo just to open my hole for her fist and later uses a 15" on that wide open cunt.

The door knock leaves you many avenues to go do- will it be a group of fellow Dommes or will it be some of her slaves coming to use her newest toy?

I sincerely hope that you follow up or at least give a copy of your outline to me so that I can edit it for you to get the process going.

You need to slow it down. Give us more time for each thing. I'd rather read pages of good writing than read only 1 page of rushed writing. Good otherwise. Not a big fan of scat play though