All Comments on 'First Time and First Mate'

Take it slow, like your protagonist wanted it. Slowly, build it up to a climax, don't rush into it, you have the rest of your writing life to cram in the mundane stuff. Make me hard while I read. Please!

awesome horny story. love the build up now you have started with this first erotic story. and the brilliant writing now time for the next part. i can see. you have try the first fucking now you can start that next hot story

A very good story and well written. I look forward to more of your stories.