by LovelyLittleLies
The 1960 Mustang is the glaring error, but there were several little glitches that detracted.
Overall not a bad story.
I really liked your story......
Keep writing you're doing a great job.
Heyy there's no need to be so harsh. I didn't even notice and if your wrapped up in the story enough you shouldnt even notice. Plus since when have you ever read a published book that doesn't have 1 mistake. Even those that have been proof read 100s of times get printed with mistakes. Give the girl a break.
Honestly your talented and I will constantly check back for more of your writings. Don't worry about mistakes they are natural. Keep writing cause you have it for sure. <3 this series!!!!!