All Comments on 'My Sister's Proposal'

Short and to the point. I like it. I hope we learn about the sister's bi side.

Keep it up.

Good story. Had all the elements. I think there was room to stretch out the seduction a little more. Him making her work a little harder for that room she wanted. Still there is room for more.

while it lasted.

Maybe if there were more sex with his sister.

Scenes of the next day, and how they interacted with each other after she moved into his place.

A little love between the siblings, more than just brother and sister love would have been nice.

Thanks for the read.

way to rushed no back ground to tell what their relationship was like before this and no thought or struggle on his part when she says she can take care of him sexually this was like going to see a three hour bad B movie and getting there an hour late and leaving with an hour to go needs a good editor and a rewrite this was a good first draft but not postable

It was like one of those pornos from the 80s where the pizza delivery guy shows up and immediately starts banging the home alone housewife as soon she opens the door.

I wish my sister would do this with me! because she has seen a video on my computer that I had made of my hard cock, and then she watched it a few times, and said that it is way bigger then the guy whom she has a kid with! which made me pretty proud!

Keep writing your doing well